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[SS/HP] Five Senses (end) by:Eriador117

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发表于 2009-7-21 12:23| 字数 2,558 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Author: Eriador117
Website:http://eriador117.insanejournal.com
Email:annette.gisby@which.net
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Annette
(Eriador117)



Five Senses

Sight

It's the wrists he notices first, peeking out from the edge of the boy's shirt; all skin and tendon, a nub of bone visible as he flexes and begins to write.

He watches, entranced, as the hand moves across the page, then he notices the lack of ink on the desk.

Red drops drip from the edge of the quill as he sees the boy wince.

But it isn't the red that has the boy gasping, it's the pink out of the corner of his eye and the satisfied smirk on Umbridge's face.

"Enough!" screams Harry and he's pushed out.





Hearing

"You had no right! That's private!" Harry yells, his face flushed, his eyes incandescent. Severus hears the words, but he is barely aware of them.

The boy is so passionate when he's angry and Severus wonders how that passion might translate to other, more intimate areas. Would he hear the boy scream in ecstasy? Or would it be a soft whimper of desire?

"Not to me. You wanted this, Potter. You asked for this."

On his knees, bound and naked, the boy looks up. "I didn't. Not for this. Not for this."

The boy’s sobs are music to Severus’ ears.




Smell

Harry tries not to panic as the blindfold is magicked onto his eyes. He want to pull it off, but his hands are bound and he cannot move. As Snape moves closer to him, he can smell him. All of him. There is a hint of something medicinal, probably some potion he'd been working on before Harry arrived. As well as that, Harry can smell the man's arousal. It's a scent he has become adept at identifying. Almost before he's aware of it, Harry has licked his lips and the moan he swore he wouldn't release has escaped his lips.




Taste

"Liar. Slut. You want it, don't you? Isn't this what you wanted?"

"Yes," Harry breathes the word, his head spinning in fear and desire.

"Yes, what?"

"Yes, sir."

Harry hears a rustle of cloth and then footsteps as Snape moves closer. almost gently, Snape guides Harry's head to his erect cock and Harry swallows it down, tasting the bitter precome. With his hands bound, he can't control the angle and Snape thrusts deeper, thrusts faster. Harry can barely taste anything now, too busy trying not to choke. When Snape comes, Harry swallows quickly. He's never got used to the taste.




Touch

Hands are on him, removing the blindfold, untying his hands and then he is cradled across the Potion master's lap, across his husband's lap.

Soft touches and caresses to his hair and back as Harry feels the blood returning to his limbs. His whole body feels like rubber. Severus only has to tug once on Harry's cock, before he is coming, spurting between them, his husband's touch so familiar.

Severus gently caresses the scar still gracing Harry's hand.

"Are you all right, my Harry?"

Harry gazes up at his husband and smiles as he caresses his cheek. "I am now."


THE END
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发表于 2009-7-23 09:19| 字数 70 | 显示全部楼层
Not aboil, not vehement, but quiet and gentle.
Good story, though a little short...
发表于 2010-7-20 20:24| 字数 255 | 显示全部楼层
发表于 2010-10-25 19:29| 字数 380 | 显示全部楼层
Ohhhhh~What an excellent BDSM!
Prof.Snape is so sexy,affectionate,wild and tenderly.
Harry is stubborn and reluctant to admit mistakes or defeats.Beyond all doubt,he loves Prof.Snape.Nevertheless,he doesn't want to admit it.So,maybe,a perfect  BDSM is a quite good choice,isn't it?
As expected,SS/HP is really my favorite!
Thank you for the outstanding works!
小哈果然是嘴硬的家伙呀。。教授真不愧是斯莱特林性感之神啊。。集性感、粗暴、深情与温柔于一身啊。。斯哈大爱啊。。而且BDSM什么的最有爱了。。
发表于 2011-4-6 23:59| 字数 20 | 显示全部楼层
教授也有这样一面,还以为只有毒舌系的呢。
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发表于 2011-8-28 15:39| 字数 271 | 显示全部楼层
OOO...so let's see what's in our Professor's mind!!Greed or glee?Enh?
Obviously Pro.Snap is not only an ascetic but also a sadist.Perfect match.So,to him,sex is ART!O well,let's welcome our SEX MASTER.(i quite fancy calling Snap "master")
----------同时也觉得Harry的M character显示两人其实是born for each other。。。
发表于 2011-9-1 23:10| 字数 87 | 显示全部楼层
i love this kind of writing style...pretty much...inspiring...haha
不过我没读过什么sm的文吖,有些东东。。。需要消化。。。
发表于 2011-9-17 17:27| 字数 114 | 显示全部楼层
I think I like the story although it's too short. The bdsm story is gentley,and Prof.Snape is a
good  master.
大爱调教系啊,教授绝对是个温和又不失严厉的好主人啊
发表于 2011-11-22 14:48| 字数 37 | 显示全部楼层
啧啧,像是在看电影预告片,寥寥几个镜头,把整个故事截取下来,有人有同感不?
发表于 2011-12-12 23:19| 字数 46 | 显示全部楼层
通过五官感觉去形容哈利与教授之间的互动, 很有创意, 是一篇不错的文, 虽然有些短, 但是谢谢分享!
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