Crush (end) by:Eriador117

小腐宝宝 · 发表于 2010-10-29 16:14| 字数 80

virgin blood does taste very sweet？XD~so good&sweet~~

（SS和HP的甜蜜神马的最好了~关键，吸血鬼是一大亮点~）

shirley7331 · 发表于 2010-12-7 15:10| 字数 22

5555，英文水平不够啊，看不懂啦，伤心啊。

爱夹子 · 发表于 2010-12-17 18:43| 字数 180

I'm so confused……
I'm busy looking up the dictionary while reading……
Haven't finished it yet……
I hope I can finish it and understanging it well……
……………………………………………………………………
好囧啊……我还以为这里只让回英文呢……原来是必须有中文啊……= =+

残酷的童话 · 发表于 2010-12-23 00:18| 字数 43

英语渣渣的表示鸭梨好大……不过为了SS和HP的河蟹美好生活，抱着牛津词典不要大意的上！

Gchatrabbit · 发表于 2010-12-23 22:55| 字数 373

本帖最后由 Gchatrabbit 于 2010-12-23 23:01 编辑

This is really a great story. I do like the storys in which Severus were a vampire.

However，it's a little bit bizarre that Severus is so straight with his feelings. It seems to me that Severus will never say sth like "I fancy you".

And, No, Severus, you can't do that keeping Harry's vignity forever thing. Don't even try it!

Finally，thanks for sharing this story.

(太囧！写了英文回复，每次扫一眼都能看到自己的语法错误！)

ef12u7 · 发表于 2011-4-25 23:38| 字数 144

hmm ~a vampire story~
harry is so wild~
at first i did not rilize that it was a vampire thing
and i was curious about "bite"OTZZZ
教授变成了吸血鬼口牙……是很新奇的设定~
么有经验的小哈XDD

foyer76 · 发表于 2011-6-17 05:17| 字数 175

haha...nice fic
the combination of vampire and Severus makes him even more charming~
oh, and it was hot when Harry asked " would you fuck me some day"~~
好看~~就是短了点，最后执行任务的时候好仓促。。。教授要是描写的在性感点就好啦~

jdllovep · 发表于 2011-6-22 21:23| 字数 21

哎，要看一篇有爱的斯哈文还要翻字典，杯具啊

dreamlinks · 发表于 2011-12-10 23:28| 字数 58

ERIADOR真的很有创意, 没有想到SNAPE居然可以以吸血鬼的身份在战后继续存活下来, 还与哈利一起做傲罗. 很好看!

沐光水色 · 发表于 2012-8-1 14:15| 字数 35

我想我应该去好好补习一下英语了，看得好费劲，在脑子里一个字一个字得翻啊

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