When Did You Last See Your Father? (end) by:Eriador117

领主大人

It is the second fiction I read in English.And the first one was little prince.My English isn't very
good,so it's too hard for me to understand it well.
But all in all,I like it.
At last,thanks a lot for this wonderful fiction.
加上一两句中文……嗯，我才上高中，会努力提高英语水平的！
很温馨的文~

lavendar047

Nice story! After neglecting all the sad parts including finghting with the dard lord and and how being involved, only happiniess are left. I am so happy to learn that all harry's negative reaction at the begginning is more because of the preganency. Hope the happiness last!
原来还需要加中文阿，呵呵！没想到居然能看到H，最开始看哈里波特其实就是看的英文

rye001

This is the first time I read an English article for fun, I hope I can read the whole story. But it's still good...I should read more stories in this section, as long as I have the patient,I think it will really help me with my reading skills..
lol..Severus snorted. "Does it look as though Harry shares my unfortunate genes, Poppy?"
this really made me laugh.
and by the way..第一次用英语看H啊啊啊啊啊。。。

Oh, and I have a question, does this article has anything to do with its title?

殇默

唉！！我英文学的不好！！所以看得我好吃力！！唉，不过总算是看玩了！！期待教授和哈里结婚啊

凤常洛

"That bitch! That fucking bitch!" he shouted loud enough for Professor McGonagall to hear him.
Harry how can you be so cuuuuuute even when you "fuck" someone XD
噗
小哈爆粗口真的
真的很让人有施虐欲囧

汪凹凹

Harry now had all he'd ever wanted and needed. A home and a family
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很短的文章，但是完结得温暖又窝心
很喜欢这种感觉><
谢谢LZ分享过来

lynn0313

first i just want to say
i love the topic, it's really caught people's eye balls
haha because i just love this feeling
囧 原来紧紧英文不行哦
lz还是很好滴 加油

clara

This fiction is sweet and I like it : )
At the begining, I thought Severus hates Harry.
And I am so angry about the news article...
fake scandal of someone who had died?!  Do Rita knows the word 'respect'?!
Anyway, I love the ending very much!
溫柔的S照顧小H,好甜啊~
希望有番外或續集,關於S與H的生活!

Emma23

Wow，and It's really a fantastic idea that professor is harry's father!
I was shcoked by the beginning ,but I really like it!
好吧，我也明白为什么英文评论下面都要加几句中文了~
这篇好棒~

喵呀喵

看到整篇英文就頭痛..
結果用翻譯軟體翻的好奇怪啊~
但可以猜測內容..
只是...小哈懷孕了..沒小到寶寶出來就沒了@@!
是想停留在這好讓我們自己腦補?
還有...小哈說教授是他丈夫..只是似乎沒有結婚這段...