Banishment (end) by Cheryl Dyson

zoomy

so freaking hot！！I love the situation at the beginning that a naked Harry sprawling on the grass( such a lure )  and  Draco worried about him so much that jump into shower together (I believe he's deliberate to do so LOL)  Sweet ending and poor Pensy
潘女王永远只能是炮灰啊捶地。。浴室真是个好地方啊噗。。于是顺利同居。。。。

唔,前面一段有点没看懂。不过H那段即使有很多单词不会,可连猜带蒙再加点联想,我竟然看懂了...哈哈。
自从萌上德哈后更爱英语了~
Harry的神态及心理描写都很有趣。

Miss-sixty

It's really HOT~ 少爷和小哈在浴室里 想想就香艳啊XDDD

Harry很有趣。
Pancy未出本意却起到了递进作用嘛。
看英文同人会觉得在叙述和描写上比中文多了些押韵感呢。

DyEmpire

虽然不是很长但分了两次看完，这篇文很有趣。
Pancy，GOOD JOB，ahhhhh~~

Narsinva

OOOOhhh,god!!!
I can't be more excited when I see “I would very much like it if you would please fuck me right fucking now.” , and burst into laughing in "Relax, I’m not doing anything perverted"~~

a sex after Hypothermia~~
外国的肉也别有一番滋味啊。哈利都快爽哭了吼吼。

eyesayu

感谢楼主翻译/分享！
十分喜欢这样的风格~

Adelin

oh~Parkinson's revenge gives a fantastic opportunity for Draco and Harry's meet
and a deepest ,clost touch and a kind of "comunication"
in the shower,**
Draco you desire of Harry is from the sixth is known by us**
（好吧，为了凑字，）ps。几乎每一个华丽的DH背后都有一个苦逼的潘西啊啊

楚云袖

OK..I find I like this type of article too much recently, it's too hot!!To be honest, it's very hard to read the sex describtion ,because you should have both fully knowledge and words..Pansy did a good job again to make Harry and Draco fall in love!Why I see her so cute! 总之这种有肉有爱有温馨的文文最可爱啦！萌萌~

这次又是潘西，其实斯莱特林的女生有时候也很萌的撒