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发表于 2017-7-16 19:14| 字数 1,210
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Lovely story.
I particularly like how Harry addresses Draco in the letters. That is so cute that I can almost touch the lovely pink bubbles between the two. Besides, this piece of work has slow build up, which reminds me of another Drarry fic Ten Steps. I like it when you know for sure that they will end up between sheets but simply don't know when. Additionally, virgin Harry is so well depicted! I enjoy seeing that instead of shagging Draco senseless, he carefully consults Draco's ex, faces up to his own sense of insecurity and even prepares lubricant for himself lol. I guess this is when his Slytherin's side interacts with his Gryffindor part. Bravery is not without fears but being able to confront and combat them so good job Harry!
Something to consider: I can't accept the plot that Draco kills his father because Lucius wants to hurt Ron and Hermione (he doesn't even use an avada! Killing his father beacuse he casts a Cruciatus to Harry's friend doesn't seem like Draco, because I regard him as the type that values his family members much). Also for me Draco in this story is going a little too soft and too much like a protagonist. I think he couldn' have got on such good terms with Weasely and Granger that quickly. Spite and venom is just a part of him which he can't dispose of that quickly.But they are just my personal views and overall it's definetely worth reading.
可以可以写这么长说我字数不足这就很233了。少爷有点理想化了不过本身同人嘛写成这样很不错了反正不会写文的我肯定写不出来这么可爱的文章~ |
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楼主: iconangel
simple story, combining pieces throughout all these years! that kind of little sour plus sweet feeling really gets me
