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[DM/HP] I Thought of You by: Dacro

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匿名  发表于 2014-1-6 23:25| 字数 129
it's poetic and sad. the way you deeply miss the one you truly loved but will never be able to see him again is bring the sorrow to the heart.  文章很有诗的韵味,文字朴实深沉。
发表于 2014-2-3 23:12| 字数 93 | 显示全部楼层
很喜欢文章的排版。Say my name again. No one says it like you.God,I hurt. 这句话从draco嘴里说出来该多让人心疼。完全看不了虐。独白的回忆太让人难受了。
发表于 2014-7-5 22:12| 字数 40 | 显示全部楼层
为什么这么虐QAQ虐的我一口老血……可怜的小德,十年生死两茫茫,不思量,自难忘啊
匿名  发表于 2014-7-16 12:23| 字数 173
It's a wonderful article,with the deny sorrow and the unforgettable love to harry ,which let people can't help but wonder how beautiful their love would be when the death were not.
英语水平不足,见谅。然而真心想要赞美这篇文章。

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No,It's me. 嘿,为什么我突然掉线了? 有什么问题吗?  发表于 2014-7-16 12:27
发表于 2014-7-31 11:31| 字数 39 | 显示全部楼层
好心疼少爷,这种内心独白不好写,但是还是写到touching me,要泪奔〒_〒
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发表于 2014-8-1 16:15| 字数 278 | 显示全部楼层
I have been thinking the differences between the domestic fanfictions and the overseas ones for a long time.It's hard to prevent this kind of long-length monologues from falling into some boring situations.This novelette have done that easier and better than  manydomestic fanfictions of the same type.
要中文啊···人间自是有情痴,此恨无关风月。
发表于 2015-2-16 19:28| 字数 91 | 显示全部楼层
It really hurts to see this kind of fanfiction. Full of emotion and despair.
看完后觉得Draco的心情用三个字就能概括。
“带我走”。
发表于 2015-2-18 12:04| 字数 374 | 显示全部楼层
I just don't know why, but I love the words "I can't give up, and  won't move on"
Love is the most wonderful thing in the world, while it can hurt so much when you love deeply.
I wish the people in love all the best. Though it's just a fiction, it's so real. Wowwwww! I am in such a mess and don't know what I am talking about..... Draco and Harry, you are born to be together! 诶,乱七八糟地写了一堆。看这种有角色死亡的总是心塞塞,但有时也会明白爱情里不会总是美好,也会有很多伤害。嗷呜,德哈永远在一起!!!
发表于 2015-5-16 22:17| 字数 92 | 显示全部楼层
The sentence is very beautiful, also revealed a hint of sadness, let people love him.....
喜欢这种独白形式的,感觉让人好心疼
发表于 2015-10-10 17:21| 字数 200 | 显示全部楼层
But then again, I only ever think of you.

Such a heart-broken Draco. Can feel the tears and pain in every word, every sentence. His love is so desperate but also hopeless, which heavily tugged at my heartstrings.

一定要写中文么。。好伤心啊这篇,可怜的小德拉科。。
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